From Narrow Opening

February 29, 2012 § 3 Comments

no
honest footsteps
when I close my eyes
Sore

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§ 3 Responses to From Narrow Opening

  • Scriptor Obscura says:

    Hmmm…Interesting…I’ll have to think about this one…Mmm…What do you see when you close your eyes…Sorrow, pain, disappointment…I am sore? No one is honest around me…therefore I don’t hear any honest footsteps when I close my eyes…Hmmm?

    Your poems provoke thoughts, Evelyn, I really like the way that you write.

  • Eric says:

    So the footsteps you’re hearing then are sneaky and dishonest?

  • Evelyn says:

    Meaning its hard for me to sleep, I feel exposed.

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