Hmmm…Interesting…I’ll have to think about this one…Mmm…What do you see when you close your eyes…Sorrow, pain, disappointment…I am sore? No one is honest around me…therefore I don’t hear any honest footsteps when I close my eyes…Hmmm?
Your poems provoke thoughts, Evelyn, I really like the way that you write.
Hmmm…Interesting…I’ll have to think about this one…Mmm…What do you see when you close your eyes…Sorrow, pain, disappointment…I am sore? No one is honest around me…therefore I don’t hear any honest footsteps when I close my eyes…Hmmm?
Your poems provoke thoughts, Evelyn, I really like the way that you write.
So the footsteps you’re hearing then are sneaky and dishonest?
Meaning its hard for me to sleep, I feel exposed.