What a Compliment
May 29th, 2011 § 9 Comments
once
once there was
once there was this boy
once there was this boy who could crash
once there was this girl who could fly
once there was this girl
once there was
once
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- Author: Evelyn
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Sometimes it works the other way around. Excellent Sunday 160. Thanks for playing along.
Oh my goodness, I love the shape of this poem! ^^
Clever
one who crashes needs flying lessons.
one who flies MUST be prepared to crash.
no?
One who flies WILL crash
One day
The only question after that it is whether one survives.
knowing how to crash would certainly help the survival rate…
BEAUTIFUL n CREATIVE.. HUGS XOXOX
Interesting convergence of words. Clever!
Love this. Love the waxing/waning form (is it a specific form?). It’s so effective in drawing in the reader and bring intrigue to the Narrative